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Showing posts with label 1000 times. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 1000 times. Show all posts

Monday, September 23, 2013

105 Little Blades in a Line

My phone goes off again. I touch the screen and see that image of us from earlier this year at your brother’s concert. They had one battle of the bands and we were both so happy. ‘I miss you’ the text read, and all I can think is I’m right here. I pick up the next metallic sliver and bring it to my flesh. The cold metal bites into my skin the warm blood flows out of the wound, a deep red, as air hits it. Tears hit the open cuts and the salt stings, just another painful reminder I am still alive.

            “Fifteen” I whisper.


This is a portion of the short story I have been working on. Just a bit of it. I'm not done yet but when i am I'll let you know and see about getting more of it up for those who are interested.

Tuesday, September 17, 2013

1000 times


So as an assignment for my creative studies class we are writing a short story. I fell in love with this song after hearing it, it's heart wrenching. I want to take the line 105 blades in a line and play through the song of a girl who wants someone who doesn't want her in the same way.  She has this interior dialog as she goes through the blades thinking of him, her and their past, counting the blades as she uses them. At the end she commits suicide. Not the happiest of endings, but then again not everyone gets a happy ending. Let me know what you think.